
Recently, I came across a job announcement for a senior position at a museum that left me more frustrated than inspired. Despite the important role it advertised, the description was riddled with vague language, overused phrases, and an overwhelming list of responsibilities. If it weren’t for the letterhead, this could have been a job at nearly any museum in the country. Here’s what went wrong—and how we can do better:
1. Clear, Specific Language Beats Buzzwords
Phrases like “championing change management,” “leveraging opportunities,” or “fostering growth” sound impressive, but what do they actually mean? Without clarity, these terms are open to interpretation, leading to confusion or disagreements down the line. A good job description uses concrete language to convey expectations. For example, instead of “fostering growth,” specify what kind of growth: increasing visitor numbers? Expanding programming? Generating revenue?
2. Prioritize, Don’t Overwhelm
This particular job description listed a dozen “essential” duties and responsibilities, each with multiple sub-points. While comprehensive, such an exhaustive list signals a lack of prioritization. No one can excel at everything, and candidates may be deterred by the sheer scope of the expectations. Instead, focus on the top three to five priorities that are most critical to success in the role.
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